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MR-The Fang and Max Story

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Fang's POV

I couldn't stop thinking about how great Max looked right now.
   I had suggested that we try to explore our other feelings that we knew we had for each other. I had gone into a small clothes store and picked out the best thing that I could find that didn't look entirely lame, a black coat, black tie, white undershirt, black pants, black shoes. I like black, sue me.
   When I asked Max about our closer relationship she didn't at first take to it very well but after a long couple hours' persuasion and reasoning, boom, hear we were all dressed up at some nice restauraunt staring each other in the face thinking about what to say.
   I figured I would break the ice. "You look really great tonight" I said.
"Thanks, so do you, I never thought you could clean up so well" Max said. "I can have my moments if I try. Still had trouble finding un-lame clothes" I said.
  "Hi my name is Brice and I'll be your waiter this evening, are you both ready to order?" our waiter, Brice, said. "I am, are you ?" I said. "Shoot" he said. "I'll have two orders of the steak, two potatoes, and for dessert I'll have a really big slice of the chocolate cake, oh and for a drink I'll have sweet tea, better bring a few glasses of it" I said. "Is that for the both of you?" Brice said, "No thats for me" I said. "I'll have what he's having" Max said. "You sure you guys are gonna be able to eat all that?" Brice said. "Just put our order in" Max said.
    I love how she can be like that. I still couldn't believe she had agreed to go out on this date with me. Brice left to put our orders in. I noticed Max hand about half way across the table just sitting there loosely, I took it in mine. Max looked at me almost surprised and hear cheeks quickly became flushed. "Too much?" I said.
   "No it's fine just a bit sudden" she said. I grinned, I knew how rare my grins were and knew that Max liked them. Her face became even more flushed, and she looked down slightly. I could't help but grin even more.
    Brice finally came back with all of our food which took two trips to bring. We both ate and the food was delicious. We were finished eating and we got the check. "Well, you ready?" I said laying down the money I had "found" in the clothes store. "Yeah let's go" she said.
   We walked for a few minutes I had her hand in mine and walked closely beside her. I saw a closed store with an alley running behind it, "C'mon" I said bringing her with me. "Where we goin'?" Max said, "Shortcut" I said. After we were behind the store I gently leaned her against the wall and leaned in, putting our faces close together. She closed the gap between us and kissed me fiercely.
   I was taken very much by surprise and started kissing her back. We stood embracing each other tightly. I had one hand on the back of her neck and the with the other I decided to gently explore her back a bit. She pulled back, taking a deep breath and exhaling, "Well that was new" I said, "Glad you like she said a bit breathless.
   I leaned in again and kissed her once more, she immediately started kissing me back and this time it didn't seem to stop, I had both hands running up and down her back and she had her arms around my neck, 'I could get used to this' I though.
   After what seemed like hours we let go of each other. "Wow" she said, sounding a little lightheaded. "Let's head to the rest of the flock and get some sleep" she said, "Yes I'm exhausted and can't stand to be awake right now"I said, giving her a very rare half-grin, her face flushed again, "Ok let's go" I said.
Ok this is my first ever romance story and I think I may have taken a while to get to past the waiter but I hope you all like it!

P.S. I though it was much better to have Fang's POV because I haven't seen many stories with his POV.

I don't own any characters except Brice. Other's belong to James Patterson.
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o_o -Max and fang get home. Angel is staring at them- How was your date? -she said smiling. -Max and fang look at each other- O_O...uhhhh angel...